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Time to pick on my resume
« on: March 15, 2009, 10:37:30 PM »
Since no-one has posted their resume up... i thought i'd be brave enough to post my resume here for it to be picked on LOLOL


RÉSUMÉ

Personal Details

Name:      XXXXX
Address:    XXXXX
Mobile:    XXXX XXX XXX
Home:      XXXX XXXX
Email:      XXXXXXXXX

Skills and Personal Attributes

•   Motivated individual with an aim to achieve high standards in all aspects of my employment
•   Strength in commitment to my employer and being an active and co-operative team member
•   Proficient in all aspects of  Microsoft applications
•   Typing speed -  50-60 wpm
•   Excellent Communication and Customer Service skills
•   Eager to learn, creative and willing to try new things
•   Positive thinker and Quick learner
•   Reliable, Honest and Trustworthy

Education and Qualifications

2008      Certificate IV in Business Administration – Ultimo TAFE NSW

2007      Certificate III in Business Administration - Ultimo TAFE NSW

2007      Certificate II in Business Administration – Ultimo TAFE NSW

2007      Certificate I in Korean Language - Ultimo TAFE NSW

2005   Higher School Certificate
East Hills Girls Technology High School
         
2005      Certificate II in Information Technology
      East Hills Girls Technology High School

Employment History

March 08- Current Data Entry/MYOB
         Jorgensen Corporation PTY LTD
Responsibilities:
•   MYOB Accounts payable and receivable data entry
•   Quick books data entry
•   Filing
•   Reconciliation

Aug 06 – Dec 06   Mailing
Aug 05 – Dec 05   Integrated Pty ltd, Regents Park Chriso Hampers
         Responsibilities:
•   Opening and distributing Mail
•      Posting catalogues

2005         Office All-rounder (1 Month)
Mipharma PTY LTD, North Rocks
Responsibilities:
•   Operates business machines and telephone equipment
•   Maintenance of files
•   Receives and distributes mail, facsimile messages and other deliveries
•   General Administration/Clerical duties

2005           Office All-rounder
Pfizer Australia                  
Responsibilities:
•   Operates business machines and telephone equipment
•   Maintenance of files
•   Receives and distributes mail, facsimile messages and other deliveries
•   General Administration/Clerical duties

2005                Customer Service   
Kernel’s popcorn, Bankstown            
Responsibilities:
•   Customer service
•   Cash handling and operating cash register
•   Food handling and preparation
•   Kitchen hand duties

Work Experience

2004               General Hand (2 Weeks)
Trendy Dog Salon Panania                  
•   Grooming, walking, washing and feeding dogs
•   Customer service
     
 2004         Office Assistant (6 Months)
East Hills Girls’ Technology High School                                   
•   Helpdesk assistant
•   Handling hardware & software
•   Antivirus scanning
•   Networking
•   Typing
•   Developing helpdesk webpage
•   Formatting

Hobbies and Interests

•   Socialising with friends and family
•   Re-create old things
•   Drawing anime (Japanese cartoons)
•   Computing
•   Outdoor activities

References

Wendy Ross
TAFE HeadTeacher
Ph: XXXX XXXX

Patrick Jorgensen
Manager (Jorgensen Corporation P/L)
Ph: XXXX XXX XXX
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Re: Time to pick on my resume
« Reply #1 on: March 16, 2009, 06:45:41 AM »
•   Eager to learn, creative and willing to try new things
•   Positive thinker and Quick learner
•   Reliable, Honest and Trustworthy

So many positive attributes! must be quite the amazing girl  ;)

I think this is a pretty good resume, short and straight to the point, then I guess maybe its because its pasted here it looks short, it'll still be like 2 pages or 3 right?
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Re: Time to pick on my resume
« Reply #2 on: March 16, 2009, 12:42:20 PM »
Yeah its 2 pages and a bit long
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Re: Time to pick on my resume
« Reply #3 on: March 16, 2009, 08:31:25 PM »
nice resume chii, very concise and to the point, just one thing, i think
2004               General Hand (2 Weeks)
Trendy Dog Salon Panania                 
•   Grooming, walking, washing and feeding dogs
•   Customer service

kind of detracts from your otherwise pretty professional work experiences, just my opinion

btw, resume review is a great idea!
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Re: Time to pick on my resume
« Reply #4 on: March 16, 2009, 08:34:08 PM »
Yeah i was thinking of deleting that part BUT its got customer service in it so i thought to just leave it..


But i get what you mean.. and totally agree   :D :D
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Re: Time to pick on my resume
« Reply #5 on: March 16, 2009, 08:37:29 PM »
hey kim, how about just remove the (2 weeks)? they dont really need to know the time, 2004 is enough, i think 2 weeks raises some questions like why only 2 weeks? did you get fired? did you not like the work? but i think you should still leave the salon job there,  at most remove the  Grooming, walking, washing and feeding dogs, just having customer service there is okay i think :)
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Re: Time to pick on my resume
« Reply #6 on: March 16, 2009, 08:40:13 PM »
But its under the heading of work experience, so as an employer who is hiring they would assume its high school related and stuff

Right?
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Re: Time to pick on my resume
« Reply #7 on: April 23, 2009, 10:12:41 PM »
What's mailing? and who for?  :P Sorry to be picky
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Re: Time to pick on my resume
« Reply #8 on: April 24, 2009, 10:22:08 AM »
ROFLMAO its cool...

Aug 06 – Dec 06   Mailing
Aug 05 – Dec 05   Integrated Pty ltd, Regents Park Chriso Hampers
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•      Posting catalogues


Mailing with Integrated ...... only did 6 months of work for those two years LOLOL
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Re: Time to pick on my resume
« Reply #9 on: April 28, 2009, 03:43:46 PM »
thanks Chii for sharing your resume.
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Re: Time to pick on my resume
« Reply #10 on: May 10, 2009, 10:30:50 AM »
thank you chii for sharing.
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Re: Time to pick on my resume
« Reply #11 on: May 22, 2009, 06:13:29 PM »
Good resume but is it not too lengthy
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